A
new standalone enemies-to-lovers romance from USA Today bestselling
author K.A. Linde…
Derek Ballentine and I have always been on opposite sides of everything.
I went to a public Savannah high school. He went to a private Catholic school.
I went to Duke on scholarship. He went to UNC as a legacy. When we both end up
at Harvard for graduate school and we’re finally on a level playing field, I
think it’s all going to change.
I was wrong.
The only thing that changed was ending up in his bed.
Now my grandma has passed away, and Derek is the attorney helping the people
trying to steal her legacy. I’ll do anything to stop that from happening. Even
take on my lifetime enemy.
I hate him at first sight… but I also want him at first hate.
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Ruthie
– ☆☆☆☆
This is the second book in a related series, but stands alone.
If you like books which slip backwards and forwards in time, then this is for
you. I am generally not a great fan, as it takes a lot of skill to develop a
character over time and so dealing with three points in time is particularly
complicated. I thought Derek showed change over time, but Marley less so.
Admittedly, her upbringing by her grandparents had been carefully controlled,
so that she did not become like her own mother. She is now a tenured professor
who had taken a sabbatical to be with her beloved Gran, who sadly died before
she had a chance. Now she has another task, to save the house with her twin
brother, from her mother and aunt, who are keen to realise its value.
When it turns out that her nemesis from school, Derek, is going to represent
her mother, she cannot believe it. The chemistry between them, however, is
strong, and the line between professional and personal is blurring. We learn
more about how intense their pasts have been, which adds depth to how they see
things differently. In principle, this could have led to more angst than it
really did – but I enjoyed the push and pull between them and the reasons that
they never made it before this time.
What I think worked very well was the use of nicknames, which flowed through
the story, and sometimes were terms of endearment, but other times were a
weapon. It was really clever how we learned which was which, and how powerful a
word can be when wielded in anger, or in love.
Definitely a good read, with a very satisfying ending.
Erica
– ☆☆☆
3.5 Stars
As a huge fan of K.A. Linde's, a great lover of angst, and as someone who
adores the back and forth of timelines to draw an entire picture, it pains me
to say At First Hate didn't work for me. I "wanted" to love
it. While the premise was an engaging one, the execution and "voice"
is what tore me from the story itself.
This is Marley and Derek's angsty tale, as told by Marley in several time
spans. High school, the cheerleader from public and the rich boy from a rival
private school, butting heads and love-hating one another in the past and in
the present.
High school Marley is directly influenced by her mother's life choices – the
teen mom of a pair of twins, dumping the toddlers on her own mother's doorstep,
their grandmother, and never to parent again. Gran is exacting in the morality
department, refusing to allow her grandchildren to repeat the parenting
mistakes she made with her own daughter, and the mistakes her daughter made.
This shapes Marley, creates a hard-working, people-pleaser, who is very
innocent, sheltered, and world weary.
College Marley is still just as socially reserved as High School Marley, the
same innocent voice.
In the present, Gran has passed away, and the twins are fighting tooth and nail
for their inheritance (their ancestral home important to them outside of
monetary value) against their mother and their aunt, neither good daughters
which is why Gran didn't leave the home to them in the will.
Derek is your classic bad boy, rich boy, using girls as tissues boy. He gets
beneath Marley's skin, irritating, aggravating, and making her blood boil in
several ways. They begin a dance, Marley an active participant.
The past and the present collide when Derek serves Marley with a lawsuit,
acting on behalf of her mother and aunt. Former crush, past aggravator, current
enemy.
All of this sounds amazing. The plot deliciously angsty, ripe for love-hate, push-pull,
and witty repartee. Except it felt forced to me. Very forced, very fast, and
not fully fleshed out into a whole story due to the back and forth timeline,
something in which Linde usually excels.
Marley's voice does not change over the years. The sheltered teen who sounded
years younger than her age, she still sounded like that in college, and as a
grown adult in the now. It's hard to explain, as juvenile doesn't fit, as she's
not silly and empty headed. Merely a beyond sheltered mindset for someone who
had been out in the world, been to college, and is an adult. Her
"voice" never changes, while Derek's matures as he ages. It was
off-putting, as if Derek was dating a girl from junior high.
To be quite honest, I felt the shifting timelines chaotic, the introduction of
nobody characters that fit into Marley's life at the time, the setting
barebones as it was of little consequence. I felt as if they were just scenes
woven together. Yes, it created a tapestry, but they felt incomplete, more
focused on mundane daily trivialities than the actual plot. Characters were
introduced, like a current boyfriend the reader only knows for a handful of
paragraphs, what was to be a fun and angsty situation lessened because the
scene itself is just a few short pages with no true depth, fun on the surface
but emotionless. A few sentences summary, I could have just written them out in
a linear timeline and understood the story but at the expense of experiencing
the journey.
On the surface, At First Hate was a fun book. If you're an empathic
person, if I told you Marley's grandmother died and her mother was suing her
for the inheritance, you'd get the feels just from that statement. You could
read between the lines. That was my problem, with the execution and the rapid way
the back and forth scenes were written, I'm unsure if the story itself
captivated me or if I was merely empathizing with the summary of the plot,
since I never felt as if it was fully developed on the pages. The events were
all there, but I never felt as if I was experiencing them.
I wanted to like At First Hate. I adored the premise. I just felt it
wasn't actually on the pages. I overthought things, and that's entirely on me.
Fans of Linde will no doubt adore the novel. If I had read it fast, not thought
too deeply, moved on to the next portion without mulling over anything, I'm
sure I would be in the five-star camp. But my mood was contemplative, and that
in and of itself affected my entertainment value. While it was partially my
mood's fault, it doesn't erase the fact that these issues did exist within the
novel itself.
Want more of Erica’s thoughts? Click HERE
to read the rest of her review on Goodreads, which includes commentary on the
twins' behavior and Gran: (the "lying" about being at practice
punishment).
K.A.
LINDE is the USA Today bestselling author of the Avoiding series,
Wrights, and more than thirty other novels. She has a master’s degree in
political science from the University of Georgia, was the head campaign worker
for the 2012 presidential campaign at the University of North Carolina at
Chapel Hill, and served as the head coach of the Duke University dance team.
She loves reading fantasy novels, binge-watching Supernatural,
traveling, and dancing in her spare time.
She currently lives in Lubbock, Texas, with her husband and two super-adorable
puppies.
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