“Sometimes, something jolts you out of everything you
have ever known, and it isn’t possible to go back to the way things were.”
Kallie Adam’s life is turned
upside down when she loses her first love. When she can’t handle the pressure
of her overbearing life anymore, she runs away. Kallie has always been forced
to live up to everyone’s expectations. When Kallie meets Ryder, she sees an
opportunity to break out of the good girl life she always led.
Ryder Brooks has his own
secrets and knows he is no good for the girl that showed up out of nowhere. He
will only ruin her, like he ruins everything, but he can’t help wondering what
she is running from. Ryder makes Kallie feel things she thought she would never
feel again. Will he help Kallie heal or be her undoing? They will soon realize
they have more in common than they knew, enough to keep them apart.
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The one
story building was brick and had no windows. A neon open sign hung in the glass
door. This must be a bar, but I had no other options and was not about to start
driving aimlessly looking for a more family-friendly place to eat alone. I
parked and entered the building.
The smell of
smoke and beer met me. A long bar lined the wall with bottles of liquor filling
the shelves behind it. Low hung lights with green shades gave the place little
lighting. Several guys played pool in the back corner. Several other men
stopped to look at me from the tables scattered around the room.
I took a
deep breath and made my way to the bartender, who was watching me from the bar.
The older man had graying hair and looked slightly overweight. I tried to
ignore the fact that I looked like an alien in here, with my stark white dress,
expensive purse, jewelry and high heels clicking on the weathered tile. I took
the barstool directly in front of the bartender, feeling eyes watch me the
whole way there.
“Lost?” he
asked bluntly.
“And very
hungry sir,” I said meekly and embarrassed.
He gave me a
sad smile and handed me a sheet of laminated paper they called a menu. After
quickly scanning through, I ordered a burger and fries. I anxiously played with
the charms of my bracelet while waiting for my food to come. I could feel the
eyes burning into my back, but the voices picked back up as I no longer was the
center of attention.
I couldn’t
tell if it was dark out yet from inside the dark and dingy bar. I almost
laughed when I thought of my mother’s reaction if she knew where I was, instead
of her well-planned party. I never went out to bars and partied like my
classmates did. I stayed in, concentrated on my studies and watched as Chloe
and the girls got ready to head out for nights of fun and drinking. I didn’t
imagine this would be the kind of bar they would go to, though.
My food
arrived and I slowly ate the burger to stall from having to start the drive
home. Driving in the dark on the winding country roads was the last thing I
wanted to do. After all, I know how dangerous that could be. Maybe Carter would
be sitting on my patio with me right now if it had been daylight for his drive
home. Maybe I wouldn’t be in this smokey bar alone.
I slid my
card to the bartender when he took my empty plate. “Do you want to start a
tab?” he asked me.
“For
drinks?” I asked, like I have never been in a bar before. “Yes,” I answered
quickly to cover my embarrassment. I could at least try to look like I know
what I am doing and remotely blend in. I grabbed my ID from my purse and slid
it across the bar.
“What can I
get you then, sweetie?” He tucked my card under the register.
“Scotch. On
the rocks,” rolled off my tongue before even thinking. I had no idea what I was
thinking. I saw it in so many movies and commercials, it seemed like the right
thing to say.
The
bartender tried to hide his laugh and shook his head. Taking a bottle from the
shelves behind him, he filled a glass and slid it in front of me. The smell
burned my nose as I lifted it to my lips. He watched me curiously as I inhaled
a deep breath. I took a long drink from the glass to keep up my rouse.
The liquid
burned my throat like I swallowed flames. I instantly started coughing and
shaking my head to clear the burn. I kept my eyes down on the ice cubes in my
glass to avoid looking at the bartender. Surely, he must know how deep over my
head I am by now.
“Hey, Hank,”
came from a voice from next to me, drawing the worried man away from me.
“Ryder,” he
said back to the voice while popping the top off a beer bottle and sliding it
across the bar. I didn’t even hear him ask for one.
I rolled the
glass around in my hands and kept my gaze down. I just wanted to crawl up in a
hole and hide from here, this bar, and home and my family. But, I currently
have no where to hide that’s not any of those places.
“You’re not
from around here, are you?” I heard in a deep voice near my ear.
I looked up
quickly to see the guy, named Ryder, sliding over to the stool next to me. His
eyes traveled from my high heels, up my bare legs and the rest of my body
before landing on my face. I wanted to cringe away from his look, but my body
made no moves. I could almost feel his eyes moving up my skin.
Even with an
empty and broken heart, my mind could not ignore that the face in front of mine
was striking. Black hair spiked in every direction. His pointed jaw and high
cheekbones brought all your attention to piercing, dark brown eyes. Some
stubble on his chin made him look older, but his broad shoulders and wide chest
showed a body of someone younger. He raised one eyebrow at me, reminding me he
asked a question.
“Um…no. I’m
not,” I stuttered, turning away from his handsome face. He was opposite of
Carter in almost every way. I could see him still watching me from the corner
of my eye, so I took another drink to break the tension. My body shuddered as
the Scotch burned it’s way down.
“Hank,
Mojito,” he called out, slamming his hand on the bar.
Hank slid a
tall glass with mint leaves and a clear liquid inside. I turned to look at
Ryder in shock as he slid the Scotch away from me and downed the rest.
“This is
better. Trust me,” he said, sliding the glass closer to me.
In utter
curiosity, I took a small sniff. The smell of citrus and mint was a delightful
contrast to the previous drink.
“Thank you,”
I said, bringing the drink to my lips. The drink burned when swallowed, but then
was washed away with the freshness of mint, lime and bubbles.
“Ryder,” the
stranger said, sticking out his hand. His eyes shined bright with amusement and
something that looked almost daring, like he was challenging me.
“Kallie,” I
answered, putting my hand in his. His large hand covered mine. It was rough and
instantly warmed my whole body. I have an obsession with owls.
Reviews by the Wicked Reads Review Team
Ruthie – ☆☆☆
Overall I
think this is a good story with a strong underlying plot, and certainly I cared
enough to read it all the way through. However, parts of it just seemed so
unrealistic, that it detracted from the storyline. There were some funny
scenes, and some touchingly hot ones, which worked well. The story was told by
both characters, and normally they moved forward, rather than repeating a
scene. It will be very interesting to see where book 2 goes.
I was lucky enough to read an early copy, but that did mean that it had not been fully proofread - therefore I am not commenting on that aspect of it.
I was lucky enough to read an early copy, but that did mean that it had not been fully proofread - therefore I am not commenting on that aspect of it.
Angie – ☆☆☆☆
When this
book first starts there is a tragedy but I didn’t feel any emotion when I was
reading it. I honestly thought “WTH, why am I not feeling Kallie’s emotions?” I
couldn’t connect at all. Maybe the author wanted the reader to feel numb? Who
knows, but I felt nothing. When Kallie runs away and doesn’t come back is when
the story starts to “feel” real. I instantly loved Scarlet, she is wonderful.
Ryder is your typical bad boy in some ways, but he has his own issues. Kallie
is trying to find herself and live how she wants to live instead of living like
she is expected to by her family. In the small town she is stuck in due to her
broken down car, she finds some of the nicest people she has ever met, people
she can truly call friends. Kallie is starting to fit in and find herself then
her past comes and finds her. THAT is when you FINALLY feel the emotions of the
tragedy that struck in the beginning of the book! It finally comes out what
really happened that fateful night and those who are involved will shock you. Forgiveness
comes and finally you think you will get your happily ever after right?
NOPE!!!! Something happens and months go by and you don’t get much detail or
any dialogue and then BAM the book is over! I was not happy and that is putting
it mildly. I could NOT believe after everything that the book ended that way. I
sure the h*ll hope the author doesn’t make us wait forever for the next book.
Characters: At times it was easy to connect with the characters and at other times it wasn’t.
Sex: Yes
Religious: No
Would I recommend to others: Yes
More than one book in the series: Yes
Genre: Romance
Would I read more by this author: Yes
Characters: At times it was easy to connect with the characters and at other times it wasn’t.
Sex: Yes
Religious: No
Would I recommend to others: Yes
More than one book in the series: Yes
Genre: Romance
Would I read more by this author: Yes
Alyne lives in Ohio with her
husband, dog and cat. Working full time in an office all day, she spends her
nights reading, writing or watching TV marathons. She loves coffee, animals and
country music.
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